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By grinner - 18-10-2013 13:45

[AUSNZ]

Are they even necessary in light of the game and how its played today? If in fact, as i suspect, these comments are indeed superfluous, redundant or de trop, then i am just being supererogatory, and this superfluous collective display of wordsmithery is just as irrelevant as the subject itself as a whole. acquiesce or form to the negative?Are they even necessary in light of the game and how its played today? If in fact, as i suspect, these comments are indeed superfluous, redundant or de trop, then i am just being supererogatory, and this superfluous collective display of wordsmithery is just as irrelevant as the subject itself as a whole.

acquiesce or form to the negative?

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Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 15-03-2014 23:41

[ENG]

Just doing this for fun, No offence intended :) My name doesn't say it, But Im the king Of Games, I know I got you beat, But homie don't be lame, This is serious man, This thread says you have to, If you decline a challenge by default, That means I beat you! Grinner, I hope you're ready 'Coz this is gonna be sweaty, And I know you're thinking it's unnecessary, But tough, Suck it up Dawg, It's something that you have to do, Or you can leave and loose this thread its upto you :)Just doing this for fun, No offence intended :)
My name doesn't say it,
But Im the king Of Games,
I know I got you beat,
But homie don't be lame,

This is serious man,
This thread says you have to,
If you decline a challenge by default,
That means I beat you!

Grinner, I hope you're ready
'Coz this is gonna be sweaty,
And I know you're thinking it's unnecessary,
But tough, Suck it up Dawg, It's something that you have to do,
Or you can leave and loose this thread its upto you :)

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 16-03-2014 07:33

[AUSNZ]

Jolly good Zoeh, the more intelligent amongst do enjoy this conceptualization of fun as a mindset, so glad you can attempt to join us. Fascinating that this has now divulged into a rap battle, one i am only to pleased to oversee your destruction in, so..... Now listen to me 118 Leave before you start to hate That you can never be as great No matter how long you wait Winning is mind state Losing is your fate Im glad you finally took the bait To show us how bad you rate Now ive been waiting for some sick rhymes Not pissy little bitch whines This sounds like all of the other times Boy, you gotta read the signs That there can only be 1 winner He will eat you up like chicken dinner Hes quicker than yo girlfriends zimmer 1 man, 2 awesome, Always the Grinner!Jolly good Zoeh, the more intelligent amongst do enjoy this conceptualization of fun as a mindset, so glad you can attempt to join us. Fascinating that this has now divulged into a rap battle, one i am only to pleased to oversee your destruction in, so.....

Now listen to me 118
Leave before you start to hate
That you can never be as great
No matter how long you wait

Winning is mind state
Losing is your fate
Im glad you finally took the bait
To show us how bad you rate

Now ive been waiting for some sick rhymes
Not pissy little bitch whines
This sounds like all of the other times
Boy, you gotta read the signs

That there can only be 1 winner
He will eat you up like chicken dinner
Hes quicker than yo girlfriends zimmer
1 man, 2 awesome, Always the Grinner!

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 08:38

[AUSNZ]

I'm demonic, despotic. Your skills chronic, ironic. I destroy like an addict. Shit in your pants, you're static. I incite, it's chaotic. Your acuity sporadic. Aesthestic, I'm erotic. You're a disfigured damn it.I'm demonic, despotic.
Your skills chronic, ironic.
I destroy like an addict.
Shit in your pants, you're static.
I incite, it's chaotic.
Your acuity sporadic.
Aesthestic, I'm erotic.
You're a disfigured damn it.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 08:39

[AUSNZ]

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

You're disfigured goddamn it.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 08:43

[AUSNZ]

bestplaymaker TWO ONE THREE FOUR has ended this once in for all I came and I saw AND DESTROYED YOU ALL IN AWE So please leave out the door careful not to trip and fall and get hit in the ball come at me if you want morebestplaymaker TWO ONE THREE FOUR
has ended this once in for all
I came and I saw
AND DESTROYED YOU ALL IN AWE

So please leave out the door
careful not to trip and fall
and get hit in the ball
come at me if you want more

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 08:51

[AUSNZ]

cos I have more rap to spit. I will if you insist. So move over a bit. Dont get caught up in my ji*z. poommy, grinner and rest of you kids zip your mouth and please sit be terrified by my wit learn a thing or two you whitscos I have more rap to spit.
I will if you insist.
So move over a bit.
Dont get caught up in my ji*z.

poommy, grinner and rest of you kids
zip your mouth and please sit
be terrified by my wit
learn a thing or two you whits

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 16-03-2014 10:26

[ENG]

Hey what ya say Play, Okay, your rapping taste liche, Forget it, Managerzone? You should have just taken ballet, Im glad your over here since all your friends a g**'s Can't wait to see your face Since your a sheer disgrace, Ever since, Your team's really lame, The defense all the same yes they are, Now prepare to be ashamed, By the king of games, (yeah!)

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

Hey what ya say Play,
Okay, your rapping taste liche,
Forget it, Managerzone?
You should have just taken ballet,

Im glad your over here since all your friends a g**'s
Can't wait to see your face
Since your a sheer disgrace,
Ever since,
Your team's really lame,
The defense all the same yes they are,
Now prepare to be ashamed,
By the king of games, (yeah!)

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 11:10

[AUSNZ]

Your rhymes and syllables Occur in irregular intervals While mine's smooth and clinical Come at me? Tts your funeral King of games? Mate you're a tool You disgust me, please go back to school Im playing nice, dont make me play cruel Cos you dont know what the f*ck I can doYour rhymes and syllables
Occur in irregular intervals
While mine's smooth and clinical
Come at me? Tts your funeral

King of games? Mate you're a tool
You disgust me, please go back to school
Im playing nice, dont make me play cruel
Cos you dont know what the f*ck I can do

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 16-03-2014 11:30

[ENG]

Very nice, Now I'll be the little part of spice, You see, I'm the red and white anomaly here, No need for a peer, Cos I all I just need to do, Is go up a little gear...... Your "FUNERAL"? What does that mean? Sounding very rural and I'm very keen, That was sarcastic, This rhyme will leave you drastic, in an A&E or a very high operating massive [b]G.P[/b] Man, by joining this battle, You must pay the fee, By getting owned by both Grinner and me If only you can see, There is no room for free, SO GET OF THE SIDEWALK!

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

Your rhymes and syllables
Occur in irregular intervals
While mine's smooth and clinical
Come at me? Tts your funeral

Very nice,
Now I'll be the little part of spice,
You see, I'm the red and white anomaly here,
No need for a peer,
Cos I all I just need to do,
Is go up a little gear......

Your "FUNERAL"? What does that mean?
Sounding very rural and I'm very keen,
That was sarcastic, This rhyme will leave you drastic,
in an A&E or a very high operating massive G.P

Man, by joining this battle,
You must pay the fee,
By getting owned by both Grinner and me
If only you can see,
There is no room for free,
SO GET OF THE SIDEWALK!

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 16-03-2014 11:31

[ENG]

zeoh118 wrote:

Very nice,
Now I'll be the little part of spice,
You see, I'm the red and white anomaly here,
No need for a peer,
Cos I all I just need to do,
Is go up a little gear......

Your "FUNERAL"? What does that mean?
Sounding very rural and I'm very keen,
That was sarcastic, This rhyme will leave you drastic,
in an A&E or a very high operating massive G.P

Man, by joining this battle,
You must pay the fee,
By getting owned by both Grinner and me
If only you can see,
There is no room for three,
SO GET OF THE SIDEWALK!

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 16-03-2014 11:31

[ENG]

*no room for three*no room for three

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 16-03-2014 11:32

[ENG]

Just read the reply instead of the first message.Just read the reply instead of the first message.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 12:17

[AUSNZ]

Finally, a challenge Time to show off my talent Time to fire, my mortifying rap canon You're whack, you know nothing bout rap You're horrid bad Make jesus sad So sit back you knick-knack grab hold of your sack grab hold of your dads pony tails and bear my attack And dont answer back, Its too hard for you to follow and you can’t spit mate So you obviously swallowFinally, a challenge
Time to show off my talent
Time to fire, my mortifying rap canon

You're whack, you know nothing bout rap
You're horrid bad
Make jesus sad
So sit back
you knick-knack
grab hold of your sack
grab hold of your dads pony tails and bear my attack

And dont answer back,
Its too hard for you to follow and you can’t spit mate
So you obviously swallow

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 16-03-2014 12:34

[AUSNZ]

I menace with sentence On guilty and innocent I kill more than medicine I'll destroy your whole existence I'll come for you in an instant Behind you or in a distance I'm consistent, persistent Divine essence, extremist Hoped you've listened.I menace with sentence
On guilty and innocent
I kill more than medicine
I'll destroy your whole existence
I'll come for you in an instant
Behind you or in a distance
I'm consistent, persistent
Divine essence, extremist
Hoped you've listened.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 16-03-2014 21:20

[AUSNZ]

Well now we have a new name He thinks he is the new flame Strutting into my game Will only ever end in pain You think you're the playmaker But your just another faker I got the skills i need to take ya I was asleep, but now i am awake yeah I see that your from twentyone thirtyfour But your town and raps are both piss poor Allow me to fill you in on the score as i show your sorry rhymes out the door also.... quality. :)Well now we have a new name
He thinks he is the new flame
Strutting into my game
Will only ever end in pain

You think you're the playmaker
But your just another faker
I got the skills i need to take ya
I was asleep, but now i am awake yeah

I see that your from twentyone thirtyfour
But your town and raps are both piss poor
Allow me to fill you in on the score
as i show your sorry rhymes out the door


also....

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

And dont answer back,
Its too hard for you to follow and you can’t spit mate
So you obviously swallow

quality. :)

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 17-03-2014 05:33

[AUSNZ]

grinner, you're jealous cos my girlfriends thinner But i wouldnt mind munching yours up for dinner Mate Im the flame, Im past 8 miles Im king of the game, i rip in style My dark side worst than Shady's Lucifer's level maybe You got hair from the 80s And a body like a trans-lady I have thicker skin than a whale I come down at you like a hail Never once have I failed Every time I prevail Just give up and quit Walk back to your sit You took a heavy hit You lost, you admit?grinner, you're jealous cos my girlfriends thinner
But i wouldnt mind munching yours up for dinner
Mate Im the flame, Im past 8 miles
Im king of the game, i rip in style

My dark side worst than Shady's
Lucifer's level maybe
You got hair from the 80s
And a body like a trans-lady

I have thicker skin than a whale
I come down at you like a hail
Never once have I failed
Every time I prevail

Just give up and quit
Walk back to your sit
You took a heavy hit
You lost, you admit?

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 17-03-2014 11:37

[AUSNZ]

Not bad. Not bad at all. Old man please stop trying Another word you'll start dying But your GF wont be crying Cos I got her underlying You're getting red, call a nurse I think your face is bout to burst Thats if your heart doesnt first Mate I spit unrehearsed My raps venom and curse Still waiting for the one, the one that'll quench my thirstNot bad. Not bad at all.

Old man please stop trying
Another word you'll start dying
But your GF wont be crying
Cos I got her underlying

You're getting red, call a nurse
I think your face is bout to burst
Thats if your heart doesnt first
Mate I spit unrehearsed
My raps venom and curse
Still waiting for the one, the one that'll quench my thirst

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 17-03-2014 14:38

[ENG]

Nice rhymes you too :)Nice rhymes you too :)

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 17-03-2014 14:38

[ENG]

*you two*you two

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 18-03-2014 05:01

[AUSNZ]

i know i was good, as per usual but grinner too? you delusional his crap is all generic my materials all authentic but its been awhile since he answered and its cos he knows he got hammered or maybe hes just busyi know i was good, as per usual
but grinner too? you delusional
his crap is all generic
my materials all authentic
but its been awhile since he answered
and its cos he knows he got hammered

or maybe hes just busy

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 18-03-2014 07:26

[AUSNZ]

Sorry i havent been around But my life is world renowned Although i do enjoy the sound Of you getting buried in the ground Damn zeoh you must be blind My rhymes are the best youl find Better than a bump n grind With wit and insults intertwined The one thing that i envision My words explode like nuclear fission This is heading for a head on collision As i continue my relentless derision My raps cut with surgical precision The only cut bestie got is his circumcision Back to the books boy for more revision Then walk away, make the right decisionSorry i havent been around
But my life is world renowned
Although i do enjoy the sound
Of you getting buried in the ground

Damn zeoh you must be blind
My rhymes are the best youl find
Better than a bump n grind
With wit and insults intertwined

The one thing that i envision
My words explode like nuclear fission
This is heading for a head on collision
As i continue my relentless derision

My raps cut with surgical precision
The only cut bestie got is his circumcision
Back to the books boy for more revision
Then walk away, make the right decision

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 19-03-2014 05:18

[AUSNZ]

You know and I know When tensions start to grow The slick flow that I blow Throws you outta the show. So, dont try you're embarrassing yourself bro, dont cry cos you're wetting yourself, oh! While you grin like a perv I play make with verse I make play and converse With your girl without coerce I think shes bout to burst And she said I was her first. Where is zeoh in this? Did he submit defeat? Looks like hes beat Meh, barely a half decent feat.You know and I know
When tensions start to grow
The slick flow that I blow
Throws you outta the show. So,
dont try you're embarrassing yourself bro,
dont cry cos you're wetting yourself, oh!

While you grin like a perv
I play make with verse
I make play and converse
With your girl without coerce
I think shes bout to burst
And she said I was her first.

Where is zeoh in this?
Did he submit defeat?
Looks like hes beat
Meh, barely a half decent feat.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By dowopado - 19-03-2014 06:34

[BotP]

Posts of sexual content is not allowed in the forums. I deleted all the verses of that nature, and warnings are being issued to both 'bestplaymaker2134' and 'grinner'. Any future posts of sexual, vulgar content will result in a forum ban.Posts of sexual content is not allowed in the forums. I deleted all the verses of that nature, and warnings are being issued to both 'bestplaymaker2134' and 'grinner'. Any future posts of sexual, vulgar content will result in a forum ban.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 19-03-2014 06:46

[AUSNZ]

I see this has gotten slightly outta hand Ima stop before I get a ban Well played zeoh, well played grinner But I do crown myself the winner. I dont see what got deleted...I see this has gotten slightly outta hand
Ima stop before I get a ban
Well played zeoh, well played grinner
But I do crown myself the winner.

I dont see what got deleted...

Re: Erroneous Comments

By dowopado - 19-03-2014 06:54

[BotP]

Because it is not there anymore.Because it is not there anymore.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 19-03-2014 10:55

[ENG]

Woah,hey, My luck just struck BY staying away from you delinquents I never goth hurt, Well done dowopado, you did it like a clerk :)Woah,hey, My luck just struck
BY staying away from you delinquents
I never goth hurt,
Well done dowopado, you did it like a clerk :)

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 19-03-2014 13:25

[AUSNZ]

To sexual references i wont allude In case of viewing by a prude So i wont be crass, i wont be crude From here on in ill be 1 chill dude So Zeoh has returned for a gloat But as usual his rhymes dont float His brain got a hole in its boat I think its about time he grabbed his coat Im sad dowopado didnt take the time To enforce his laws with slick rhymes I guess hes not that way inclined It is a shame though, he could have shined You cant shut down a rap battle that easy It just cant get so greasy We'l just stay away from being sleazy But ill still annihilate, easy peasyTo sexual references i wont allude
In case of viewing by a prude
So i wont be crass, i wont be crude
From here on in ill be 1 chill dude

So Zeoh has returned for a gloat
But as usual his rhymes dont float
His brain got a hole in its boat
I think its about time he grabbed his coat

Im sad dowopado didnt take the time
To enforce his laws with slick rhymes
I guess hes not that way inclined
It is a shame though, he could have shined

You cant shut down a rap battle that easy
It just cant get so greasy
We'l just stay away from being sleazy
But ill still annihilate, easy peasy

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 19-03-2014 15:45

[ENG]

That wasn't a rhyme, or a gloat xD I stopped because I don't wanna constantly check between every 1 to see if someone replied with an EVEN BETTER rap then mine, which you two did, So I'm out, NOT QUITTING OR FORFEITING, just consider me inactive or MIA ALSO ITS NOT CHICKENING OUT OR WHATEVER YOU THINK!!!!That wasn't a rhyme, or a gloat xD I stopped because I don't wanna constantly check between every 1 to see if someone replied with an EVEN BETTER rap then mine, which you two did, So I'm out, NOT QUITTING OR FORFEITING, just consider me inactive or MIA ALSO ITS NOT CHICKENING OUT OR WHATEVER YOU THINK!!!!

Re: Erroneous Comments

By nickybutt23 - 26-03-2014 15:44

[AUSNZ]

[img]http://s3.amazonaws.com/rapgenius/1366841085_33715693.jpg[/img]

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 26-03-2014 15:46

[ENG]

lol go drunk you are home.lol go drunk you are home.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 27-03-2014 08:58

[AUSNZ]

zeoh says he aint chickening out thats like screaming likea girl "I wasnt freaking out" get back into the ring your missing out got rhymes in your mind? start dishing it out Im back, reformed and ready to hustle heineken on my left hand, take a big guzzle hand gun on my right hand with silencer on its muzzle your moms panties on my face, concealed and muffled flex my muscle, im ready to tussle click, bang bang! two shots from my nozzle one aimed for your brain another straight through your name.zeoh says he aint chickening out
thats like screaming likea girl "I wasnt freaking out"
get back into the ring your missing out
got rhymes in your mind? start dishing it out

Im back, reformed and ready to hustle
heineken on my left hand, take a big guzzle
hand gun on my right hand with silencer on its muzzle
your moms panties on my face, concealed and muffled
flex my muscle, im ready to tussle
click, bang bang! two shots from my nozzle

one aimed for your brain
another straight through your name.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 27-03-2014 09:59

[AUSNZ]

Oh dear bestie, you should of quit while you ahead i mean its 8 o clock already, shouldnt you be in bed? i got the lyrics and jokes that i know you dread that leave you standing there looking like a sped my credits in the black while yours is in the red if you step up again ill knock you dead!Oh dear bestie, you should of quit while you ahead
i mean its 8 o clock already, shouldnt you be in bed?
i got the lyrics and jokes that i know you dread
that leave you standing there looking like a sped
my credits in the black while yours is in the red
if you step up again ill knock you dead!

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 27-03-2014 10:07

[AUSNZ]

also kudos to nickybutt23 with eyes so red he cant see if you wanna join in please feel free unicorns rainbows spaghettialso kudos to nickybutt23
with eyes so red he cant see
if you wanna join in please feel free
unicorns rainbows spaghetti

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 27-03-2014 12:30

[AUSNZ]

wow that was just horribly awful my 5 year old cousin can come up with something more thoughtful freeonlinerapdisses.com was on maintenance? maybe its bout time you lived up to my greatness Im ripping 40 year old pommy bogans with graciousness With my fresh rhymes loaded with contagiousness kinkybutt please join us i insist dont wuss out like zeoh did but please think before you start to spit ill have you confined if you come up with something shitwow that was just horribly awful
my 5 year old cousin can come up with something more thoughtful
freeonlinerapdisses.com was on maintenance?
maybe its bout time you lived up to my greatness
Im ripping 40 year old pommy bogans with graciousness
With my fresh rhymes loaded with contagiousness

kinkybutt please join us i insist
dont wuss out like zeoh did
but please think before you start to spit
ill have you confined if you come up with something shit

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 27-03-2014 14:22

[ENG]

This was a bad idea playmaker, Just look up more ryhmes and post them if it makes you safer, No-one ain't quitting So really stop (removed), Join your ol' grandma in the grave while she's knitting. Adding people in the battle? Just a decoy like a baby's rattle So grinner doesn't burn you and focuses on the newcomers, Then that was your chance to finally do a runner. Fresh rhymes? You feeling right? Time to make a comeback and make this battle tight, You clearly ain't up for a fight You take rhymes from nusery websites just on first sight, *edit* - removed swearing/ tonnerwhu

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

wow that was just horribly awful
my 5 year old cousin can come up with something more thoughtful
freeonlinerapdisses.com was on maintenance?
maybe its bout time you lived up to my greatness
Im ripping 40 year old pommy bogans with graciousness
With my fresh rhymes loaded with contagiousness

kinkybutt please join us i insist
dont wuss out like zeoh did
but please think before you start to spit
ill have you confined if you come up with something (removed)

This was a bad idea playmaker,
Just look up more ryhmes and post them if it makes you safer,
No-one ain't quitting
So really stop (removed),
Join your ol' grandma in the grave while she's knitting.

Adding people in the battle?
Just a decoy like a baby's rattle
So grinner doesn't burn you and focuses on the newcomers,
Then that was your chance to finally do a runner.

Fresh rhymes?
You feeling right?
Time to make a comeback and make this battle tight,
You clearly ain't up for a fight
You take rhymes from nusery websites just on first sight,

*edit* - removed swearing/ tonnerwhu

Edited: 28-03-2014 22:41
Total edits: 1

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 27-03-2014 14:26

[ENG]

Man that's sounding like lullaby? You sure you didn't take the wrong drive-by? Coz this is where the big boys have a battle which will end nigh, If you come with some other jibberish I will just sigh, Because you don't what's coming for you oh my, . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ________ . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . ,.-‘”. . . . . . . . . .``~., . . . . . . . .. . . . . .,.-”. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .“-., . . . . .. . . . . . ..,/. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ”:, . . . . . . . .. .,?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ., . . . . . . . . . /. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,} . . . . . . . . ./. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:`^`.} . . . . . . . ./. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:”. . . ./ . . . . . . .?. . . __. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . :`. . . ./ . . . . . . . /__.(. . .“~-,_. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:`. . . .. ./ . . . . . . /(_. . ”~,_. . . ..“~,_. . . . . . . . . .,:`. . . . _/ . . . .. .{.._$;_. . .”=,_. . . .“-,_. . . ,.-~-,}, .~”; /. .. .} . . .. . .((. . .*~_. . . .”=-._. . .“;,,./`. . /” . . . ./. .. ../ . . . .. . .`~,. . ..“~.,. . . . . . . . . ..`. . .}. . . . . . ../ . . . . . .(. ..`=-,,. . . .`. . . . . . . . . . . ..(. . . ;_,,-” . . . . . ../.`~,. . ..`-.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . / . . . . . . `~.*-,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..|,./.....,__ ,,_. . . . . }.>-._. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .|. . . . . . ..`=~-, . .. `=~-,__. . . `,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .`=~-,,.,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . `:,, . . . . . . . . . . . . . `. . . . . . ..__ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .`=-,. . . . . . . . . .,%`>--==`` . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . _. . . . . ._,-%. . . ..`

bestplaymaker2134 wrote:

zeoh says he aint chickening out
thats like screaming likea girl "I wasnt freaking out"
get back into the ring your missing out
got rhymes in your mind? start dishing it out

Im back, reformed and ready to hustle
heineken on my left hand, take a big guzzle
hand gun on my right hand with silencer on its muzzle
your moms panties on my face, concealed and muffled
flex my muscle, im ready to tussle
click, bang bang! two shots from my nozzle

one aimed for your brain
another straight through your name.

Man that's sounding like lullaby?
You sure you didn't take the wrong drive-by?
Coz this is where the big boys have a battle which will end nigh,
If you come with some other jibberish I will just sigh,
Because you don't what's coming for you oh my,


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Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 28-03-2014 04:31

[AUSNZ]

Its been 36 hours and still no reply Surely nickybutt cant still be high I think i might know the reason why Compared to bestie and zeoh, he still uber fly Its so sad you know a site for rhymes I think you have visited it too many times Certainly explains some of your rapping crimes Mine are silver dollars, yours are nickels and dimes I aint got no friends here, got no allegiances I just like to write here to air my grievances You 3 all look weak when i make my appearances Feel free to quit at your earliest convenience I was going to stop then but im on a roll Taking you to school is like taking a stroll I make a quip about your mom, but she already my moll These lyrical beatings your getting must be taking a toll So Nickybutt is busy taking a toke While Bestie gets nosebleed from sniffin the coke Zeohs rhymes are so funny they must be a joke You all must be regretting meeting the beast you wokeIts been 36 hours and still no reply
Surely nickybutt cant still be high
I think i might know the reason why
Compared to bestie and zeoh, he still uber fly

Its so sad you know a site for rhymes
I think you have visited it too many times
Certainly explains some of your rapping crimes
Mine are silver dollars, yours are nickels and dimes

I aint got no friends here, got no allegiances
I just like to write here to air my grievances
You 3 all look weak when i make my appearances
Feel free to quit at your earliest convenience

I was going to stop then but im on a roll
Taking you to school is like taking a stroll
I make a quip about your mom, but she already my moll
These lyrical beatings your getting must be taking a toll

So Nickybutt is busy taking a toke
While Bestie gets nosebleed from sniffin the coke
Zeohs rhymes are so funny they must be a joke
You all must be regretting meeting the beast you woke

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 28-03-2014 06:05

[AUSNZ]

nicky wants to stay anonymous i've came up with a hypothesis he cant keep up its too poisonous he stepped back, he was ominous now lets get back to grin and 118 lemme get this (removed) straight, cos right now at this rate none of you will ever be great to be honest you were never good i cant promise if you ever could get on it, keep endeavoring you should lets talk about me just to conclude call up the firemen, the ambulance and the cops im too notorious, no accidents cos im too hot the feelings glorious cos i see you two rot lets see if you two can take another shot *edit* - removed swearing/ tonnerwhunicky wants to stay anonymous
i've came up with a hypothesis
he cant keep up its too poisonous
he stepped back, he was ominous

now lets get back to grin and 118
lemme get this (removed) straight,
cos right now at this rate
none of you will ever be great

to be honest you were never good
i cant promise if you ever could
get on it, keep endeavoring you should
lets talk about me just to conclude

call up the firemen, the ambulance and the cops
im too notorious, no accidents cos im too hot
the feelings glorious cos i see you two rot
lets see if you two can take another shot

*edit* - removed swearing/ tonnerwhu

Edited: 28-03-2014 22:39
Total edits: 1

Re: Erroneous Comments

By nickybutt23 - 28-03-2014 14:48

[AUSNZ]

So what if I'm high, grinner you're still gonna die My rhymes are like murder, take notes while you're a learner I'll put you on the backburner, my first post was just a precursor So you probably think you're good, you've had some wins, maybe you should? But besty and zeoh aint all that hard, like you they belong in the school yard. In the strip clubs I make it rain, while in this rap battle I'll cause you pain You'll think you don't even have a brain, I'll be sending you utterly insane Grinner, you're so old you should retire, while my game will just keep raising higher You get no ribbon for being just a trier, so I'm sorry if you're a crier It's time that I get to bed, isn't it time you got some cred? I'm the best thing since sliced bread, and your rhymes may as well go unread. By now you've probably fled, so I'll just quit while I'm aheadSo what if I'm high, grinner you're still gonna die
My rhymes are like murder, take notes while you're a learner
I'll put you on the backburner, my first post was just a precursor

So you probably think you're good, you've had some wins, maybe you should?
But besty and zeoh aint all that hard, like you they belong in the school yard.

In the strip clubs I make it rain, while in this rap battle I'll cause you pain
You'll think you don't even have a brain, I'll be sending you utterly insane

Grinner, you're so old you should retire, while my game will just keep raising higher
You get no ribbon for being just a trier, so I'm sorry if you're a crier

It's time that I get to bed, isn't it time you got some cred?
I'm the best thing since sliced bread, and your rhymes may as well go unread.
By now you've probably fled, so I'll just quit while I'm ahead

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 28-03-2014 15:40

[ENG]

bestie, just quit while you're at it, When you read my raps man you'll fall deeply in a pit, You need to learn some basic (removed,) Sit down son, And watch me pop this down like your ugly face zits, Nicky man your sticky, You gonna say something or is it damn tricky, It's better if you choose one, I'll take it easy, as smooth as a pond, Grinner you dreaming again, My rhymes yet haven't caused you pain, I feel like your raps are just everday's rain, No harm, no point, It's my turn to feel the gain *edit* - removed implied swearing/ tonnerwhubestie, just quit while you're at it,
When you read my raps man you'll fall deeply in a pit,
You need to learn some basic (removed,)
Sit down son, And watch me pop this down like your ugly face zits,

Nicky man your sticky,
You gonna say something or is it damn tricky,
It's better if you choose one,
I'll take it easy, as smooth as a pond,

Grinner you dreaming again,
My rhymes yet haven't caused you pain,
I feel like your raps are just everday's rain,
No harm, no point, It's my turn to feel the gain

*edit* - removed implied swearing/ tonnerwhu

Edited: 28-03-2014 22:38
Total edits: 1

Re: Erroneous Comments

By tonnerwhu - 28-03-2014 22:42

[Celts]
President

All you dribblers need to lay off the swearing, Implied or not it's against forum rules, you hearing! One more out a line and it's beyond a warning, I'll rip you punks limb from limb and leave ya sobbing.All you dribblers need to lay off the swearing,
Implied or not it's against forum rules, you hearing!
One more out a line and it's beyond a warning,
I'll rip you punks limb from limb and leave ya sobbing.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By nickybutt23 - 29-03-2014 02:35

[AUSNZ]

You forum assistants always try keep us brothers down You strut your stuff around the streets like you wear a golden crown I guess you haven't heard our swags on another level Man, if you were a pokemon you'd be a lowly weedle Cmon you guys, don't let toner give you all a ban You know deep down beneath it all he really is a fan Just remember to all your cussing to a low Later on down at da clerb we'll share some lines of blowYou forum assistants always try keep us brothers down
You strut your stuff around the streets like you wear a golden crown

I guess you haven't heard our swags on another level
Man, if you were a pokemon you'd be a lowly weedle

Cmon you guys, don't let toner give you all a ban
You know deep down beneath it all he really is a fan

Just remember to all your cussing to a low
Later on down at da clerb we'll share some lines of blow

Re: Erroneous Comments

By tonnerwhu - 29-03-2014 11:31

[Celts]
President

Yo nicky I see ya there, standin up, actin cool, as if you got a pair. See this stare!? Thats right [b]"bro"[/b] it's time you zip up that hole in ya face, take a seat now, you total disgrace. Pahaha, I just gotta laugh at ya state, cos at this rate.. hell, you'll still be dossing in mom's basement well past 38, servin burgers till late, longing for that first date... Newsflash boi: It ain't gonna be gifted to your fat rear on a plate! There you have it nickybutt, now shimmy on back to yer smut, be gone, you cowering little mutt. I hope ma rhymes aren't too cutting, I'm merely just taunting, chill out, relax, go back to your spliffing.. I best be off tho - to the streets for some strutting.Yo nicky I see ya there, standin up, actin cool, as if you got a pair.
See this stare!? Thats right "bro" it's time you zip up that hole in ya face, take a seat now, you total disgrace. Pahaha, I just gotta laugh at ya state, cos at this rate.. hell, you'll still be dossing in mom's basement well past 38, servin burgers till late, longing for that first date... Newsflash boi: It ain't gonna be gifted to your fat rear on a plate!

There you have it nickybutt, now shimmy on back to yer smut, be gone, you cowering little mutt. I hope ma rhymes aren't too cutting, I'm merely just taunting, chill out, relax, go back to your spliffing.. I best be off tho - to the streets for some strutting.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 29-03-2014 12:05

[AUSNZ]

This forum assistant, he took a shot and missed it My ass crack hasnt been wiped, I saved it for you to kiss it But be careful mate, dont get cocky when you're out strutting Cos with intellect like yours, you're an attraction to getting a cutting This is serious man, this aint even funny Cos I'll be coming for you, you better start running I'm slick, when I click, too quick and cunning Blade in my backpocket, and my babes look stunning As for the rest of you, I've moved on to something new This assistant, is just way too easy for me to skew And his girl, is even easier for me to [i](a short, slender, sharp-pointed metal pin with a raised helical thread running around it and a slotted head)[/i] One admin down, bring on the rest of the crewThis forum assistant, he took a shot and missed it
My ass crack hasnt been wiped, I saved it for you to kiss it
But be careful mate, dont get cocky when you're out strutting
Cos with intellect like yours, you're an attraction to getting a cutting
This is serious man, this aint even funny
Cos I'll be coming for you, you better start running
I'm slick, when I click, too quick and cunning
Blade in my backpocket, and my babes look stunning

As for the rest of you, I've moved on to something new
This assistant, is just way too easy for me to skew
And his girl, is even easier for me to (a short, slender, sharp-pointed metal pin with a raised helical thread running around it and a slotted head)
One admin down, bring on the rest of the crew

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 30-03-2014 12:08

[AUSNZ]

Oh my god you guys are terrible Your rhymes are so poor they border on hysterical Next time think before you try to wax the lyrical Please dont repeat something so unbearable Ok, i think its time to take you boys to school Not that have to try hard to make you look the fool With your knuckles on the ground and a mouthful of drool You obviously swim in the shallow end of the gene pool Its good to see the cockney scot FA Stepping up with something to say Makin sure that we all play fair While having about much edge as a carebear Nickybutt and tonner are quite the pair Even if both their brains are on a gap year Dunno how they think they can even step up and play Dreamin of bein snoop doggy dogg and dr dre Even bestie having trouble bringin it His edited rhymes are still total (faecal matter) 99 percent miss for 1 percent hit His bubble getting burst just like his zits I think its time for an update Im still standing tall while playing it straight Towering over bestie, tonner, butt and 118 Your rhymes are ghetto while mine are prime real estate With the bar set so low it aint hard to look great Im Emperor Zurg in a sea of Buzz Ligthweights At least they aint never gonna affect the national birth rate But more challengers means more moms for me to "date"Oh my god you guys are terrible
Your rhymes are so poor they border on hysterical
Next time think before you try to wax the lyrical
Please dont repeat something so unbearable

Ok, i think its time to take you boys to school
Not that have to try hard to make you look the fool
With your knuckles on the ground and a mouthful of drool
You obviously swim in the shallow end of the gene pool

Its good to see the cockney scot FA
Stepping up with something to say
Makin sure that we all play fair
While having about much edge as a carebear
Nickybutt and tonner are quite the pair
Even if both their brains are on a gap year
Dunno how they think they can even step up and play
Dreamin of bein snoop doggy dogg and dr dre

Even bestie having trouble bringin it
His edited rhymes are still total (faecal matter)
99 percent miss for 1 percent hit
His bubble getting burst just like his zits

I think its time for an update
Im still standing tall while playing it straight
Towering over bestie, tonner, butt and 118
Your rhymes are ghetto while mine are prime real estate

With the bar set so low it aint hard to look great
Im Emperor Zurg in a sea of Buzz Ligthweights
At least they aint never gonna affect the national birth rate
But more challengers means more moms for me to "date"

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 30-03-2014 13:04

[AUSNZ]

I cant believe you actually bought up snoop dog There are better choices, like Eminem the rap god The title of rap god has been taken off the table And Im next in line, so i'll call myself the rap angel Your just a being Em and I created for entertainment That goes for the rest of you mutts, you're all adjacent I control this battle, its all within my containment So far into this, Im yet to feel any amazement Cos its so easy, take you all down for a beating I rip with my eyes close, I even spit while Im eating Go make me some more food, like a steak that Im needing Are any of you even trying? Doesnt feel like anyones competingI cant believe you actually bought up snoop dog
There are better choices, like Eminem the rap god
The title of rap god has been taken off the table
And Im next in line, so i'll call myself the rap angel

Your just a being Em and I created for entertainment
That goes for the rest of you mutts, you're all adjacent
I control this battle, its all within my containment
So far into this, Im yet to feel any amazement

Cos its so easy, take you all down for a beating
I rip with my eyes close, I even spit while Im eating
Go make me some more food, like a steak that Im needing
Are any of you even trying? Doesnt feel like anyones competing

Re: Erroneous Comments

By tonnerwhu - 31-03-2014 21:49

[Celts]
President

Pahaha, you Straya gits, givin it large Let me spit a quick rhyme that'll bust thru ya's like a barge. Yo grinner, prepare yourself, this'll prove a stinger, Ima mock you more, than my team's left winger, You come at me with such hatred, just see what you've created, And for what!? Yer barbed... Cos the black cats hav just been relegated! Then there's later, when your swigging out the barrel I'll be out cheering, laughing... singing.. "Supaaa Andy Carroll!" You punks better realise this ain't no rap battle, Mess wit me at yer peril, I'll jump ya blindside, like a flyin squirrel! Lmao, that last line :DPahaha, you Straya gits, givin it large
Let me spit a quick rhyme that'll bust thru ya's like a barge.

Yo grinner, prepare yourself, this'll prove a stinger,
Ima mock you more, than my team's left winger,
You come at me with such hatred, just see what you've created,
And for what!? Yer barbed... Cos the black cats hav just been relegated!

Then there's later, when your swigging out the barrel
I'll be out cheering, laughing... singing.. "Supaaa Andy Carroll!"
You punks better realise this ain't no rap battle,
Mess wit me at yer peril, I'll jump ya blindside, like a flyin squirrel!

Lmao, that last line :D

Re: Erroneous Comments

By zeoh118 - 01-04-2014 20:29

[ENG]

Not bad tonner, More people are in so It's gonna get funner, But not for playmaker, Oh no mate you ain't gonna do a faker This is my part so I'll make it stab all your hearts My rhymes will leave your momma pushing you in a trolley cart And I'll be here relaxing eating hard earned tarts, So here's my point, there's no quit to your blabber I'll Dislocate all your joints, Walk away going "Shabba!" Cos everyone knows here that you ain't no true rapper.Not bad tonner,
More people are in so It's gonna get funner,
But not for playmaker,
Oh no mate you ain't gonna do a faker

This is my part so I'll make it stab all your hearts
My rhymes will leave your momma pushing you in a trolley cart
And I'll be here relaxing eating hard earned tarts,

So here's my point, there's no quit to your blabber
I'll Dislocate all your joints, Walk away going "Shabba!"
Cos everyone knows here that you ain't no true rapper.

Re: Erroneous Comments

By bestplaymaker2134 - 02-04-2014 08:03

[AUSNZ]

Wow your crap is getting old now You keep saying how you so good but you never tell us how No puns, metaphors, no play on words Each verse you merge just gets worse and worse Even your rhymes are basic, you try as if youre wasted Youre just like snoopdog, if he never made it So heres a tip for you to take a sip Try to fit more than one rhyme into each of your sh*t At least pretend to be smarter than what you are Cos you rap like you have been kissing arseWow your crap is getting old now
You keep saying how you so good but you never tell us how
No puns, metaphors, no play on words
Each verse you merge just gets worse and worse

Even your rhymes are basic, you try as if youre wasted
Youre just like snoopdog, if he never made it

So heres a tip for you to take a sip
Try to fit more than one rhyme into each of your sh*t

At least pretend to be smarter than what you are
Cos you rap like you have been kissing arse

Re: Erroneous Comments

By grinner - 02-04-2014 10:57

[AUSNZ]

Oh my god the outlook is bleak 1, 2, 3 players, all of them weak None of you got the talent that you seek Need to see how its done? then c'mon take a peek At how a master busts out his lines Burying muppets like you in record times If you could read you would see the signs If rap was a crime, you couldnt pay the fines We got Nicky and Zeoh toking on the bongs We got Tonner gibbering crap where he dont belong Last we got Bestie thinking he writing songs While Grinner still the winner being cooler than the Fonz Everybody stop! Hold the phone And check out the next edition of The Zone With me and Bestie battlin' for the throne One of us grinning, the other getting pwned Because all my lyrics are homegrown While Besties are so bad he just cant atone Ill show you all the skills ive honed Wiping out the competition like frickin cycloneOh my god the outlook is bleak
1, 2, 3 players, all of them weak
None of you got the talent that you seek
Need to see how its done? then c'mon take a peek

At how a master busts out his lines
Burying muppets like you in record times
If you could read you would see the signs
If rap was a crime, you couldnt pay the fines

We got Nicky and Zeoh toking on the bongs
We got Tonner gibbering crap where he dont belong
Last we got Bestie thinking he writing songs
While Grinner still the winner being cooler than the Fonz

Everybody stop! Hold the phone
And check out the next edition of The Zone
With me and Bestie battlin' for the throne
One of us grinning, the other getting pwned

Because all my lyrics are homegrown
While Besties are so bad he just cant atone
Ill show you all the skills ive honed
Wiping out the competition like frickin cyclone

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